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thug love?

haha i dind't know wat to title this but i guess..umm
enjoy. iono why i wrote this randomly so if it sucks remind me.







this pain got me goin crazy
no one ta stay wit me
thought i had a clicc
turns out they just killaz and minds of the sick
this life as a thug aint cuttin it
almost gettin shot everyday
its true life is shit..
everything turned a sin
no precious moments
nothing worth saving to keep within
until one day my life had made its first turn.

[hook?]

So this is wanted to tell you sweetie
you were the best thing that ever happened,
cuz girl you were the closest to heaven id ever get
i wonder what woulda happen if we never met
and for this im happy one thing turned out well..

but now like every sad story i gotta depart
and guess wat boo u da only one i saved in my heart
you are so special to me
but because it wasn't the other way around..


i left this earth....
at least the pains gone.
though i think im wrong
because there is no hope left without you

Re: thug love?

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Originally posted by azn0monk
So this is wanted to tell you sweetie
you were the best thing that ever happened,
cuz girl you were the closest to heaven id ever get
i wonder what woulda happen if we never met
and for this im happy one thing turned out well..

but now like every sad story i gotta depart
and guess wat boo u da only one i saved in my heart
you are so special to me
but because it wasn't the other way around..


i left this earth....
at least the pains gone.
though i think im wrong
because there is no hope left without you

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its better to lose a lover, than to love a loser

i really like the hook part too ..

guess we're just both saps for romantic stuff maswushot! hehhe ...

its really sweet how you described the words how the "person" in the 'poem' really feels about his girl ..

hey good stuff... its in a way inspirational... i like

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it's really good.

damn we really need that thumbs up smilie back.

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Originally posted by MellowYellow
damn we really need that thumbs up smilie back.

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good shit dex mad props keep postin moe