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Posted by ajy on 03-30-2003 11:03 PM:

yes i made a poem

When your stars are baked,
And your rivers fly,
Do you ever believe you were stuck out in the Sky,
When your castle breaks,
And your feet are dry,
Do you ever believe you were stuck out in the Sky,
Do you believe, when you're high,
That your life is tried,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't ever get stuck in the sky, when you're high:
When your moon is fake,
And your mermaids cry,
Do you ever believe you were stuck out in the Sky,
When your tunnel fades,
And your guide is shy,
Do you ever believe you were stuck out in the Sky,
Do you believe, when you're high,
That your life is tried,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't ever get stuck in the sky, when you're high,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't ever get stuck in the sky, when you're high
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't ever get stuck in the sky, when you're high


Posted by MasWusHot on 03-31-2003 12:39 AM:

pshh system of a down ~ peephole lolol

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Posted by ajy on 03-31-2003 01:06 AM:

quote:
Originally posted by MasWusHot
pshh system of a down ~ peephole lolol


YES


hahahahah

i thought no one would find out


Posted by PsychoSnowman on 03-31-2003 07:28 AM:

quote:
Originally posted by AjY 2k
YES


hahahahah

i thought no one would find out



hahaha i saw it coming. nice try though.

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Posted by TyGer STyLe on 03-31-2003 08:18 PM:

haha... i'll over look it...

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Posted by MasWusHot on 03-31-2003 10:16 PM:

quote:
Originally posted by AjY 2k
YES


hahahahah

i thought no one would find out


hahahaha ic ~~ i LOVE soad of course i would find out lol , and thats like one of my favorite songs by them .. it reminds me of a carnival hahaha

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Posted by azn0monk on 04-01-2003 05:41 AM:

lol frealz didn't sound possible you would write a poem


Posted by AZN Pinoy BOI on 04-01-2003 09:00 PM:

haha at first it looked more like it should be lyrics for a song then a poet... then u were found out

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Posted by MaGiKToToRo on 04-27-2003 02:39 PM:

uh oh.....

lol, i dont think u wrote this

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