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Competition #2 Poll

Haha ok two people submitted (KeN VeRsUs RyU and rYcEPuFf) The deadline is 3 days so get voting...

Here's the one by rYcEPuFf:
this sharpie pen sure does smell
its killing my only brain cell
i was trying to walk but i fell
then i cracked like a little shell

Here's the once by KeN VeRsUs RyU:
my poems dont like to rhyme
they like to take their time
takes special care to grow

my poems might not mean anything
but at least they're not nothing
and maybe you'll hear it flow

my poems are ongoing sentences
with methaphoric substances
but im probably just kidding

my poems make me laugh
cuz this is my first draft
and i can't find words that fit in

my poems are retarded
but at least with this i started
in a contest that no one really favors

my poem's about to end
so wont you be my friend?
i ask you.....wont you be my neighbor?

Please vote in favour of whoever you think made the better poem.

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wow.. look at all that stiff competition rycepuff... good luck ryce puff!

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Originally posted by KeN VeRsUs RyU
wow.. look at all that stiff competition rycepuff... good luck ryce puff!

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Well the voting is over and KeN VeRsUs RyU won by one vote, ahhh sorry rYcEPuFf, better luck next time.

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