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"Useless"
Havent written a poem in a long time, thjis one really sucks, just was feelin stuff, thinkin so i wrote as i was thinking about it. structurally the poem shouldnt even be called a poem lol.
"Useless"
My life is so worthless, nothing special at all,
My body is so useless, i only stumble and fall,
I cant even stay up on my own two feet,
Always look to others for assistance because i am so weak,
I cant do anything right, everything i do is wrong,
No one understands me, this is why im so alone,
I have no skills or talents that set me apart,
Nothing of that sort, im just scarred at heart,
My traits as a human are undesireable,
My characteristics as a person are unfavorable,
I cannot rap, im not lyrically skilled,
I cant do anything, i might as well be killed,
Not the slightest bit intelligent,
Im in smart classes but thats irrelevant,
Because i really am so stupid,
And i never had any luck with cupid,
Love is something thats never brought me good,
Bring only pain and suffering it always would,
Useless, useless, that is what i am, that is me,
And forever worthless my life will be.
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...i'm feelin it.....
i relate to like 98% o' it....
u kno how to put stuff into writin.....
nice, nice...
quote:
Originally posted by chung_freestyle
...i'm feelin it.....
i relate to like 98% o' it....
u kno how to put stuff into writin.....
nice, nice...
Re: "Useless"
quote:
Originally posted by J-DraGoNz
structurally the poem shouldnt even be called a poem lol.
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