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Poem: You will soon.

Just a random freestyle poem that I wrote.
Wrote what I had in mind. It somewhat connects to Naruto.. The "morals" of the anime sort of inspired me... --; Stupid Toshi.

You will soon.

Always standing behind.
Watching other's backs.
Seeing them do everything.
As if I wasn't good enough.

But shaking in the presense of somebody 'better.'
I take a look at myself and think that I'm inferior.
Putting myself on the bottom,
And putting the other on the top...

Living a hated life.
It's pretty hard to find somebody to like.
With everybody against me.
All I want is for somebody to like me.

I have to try harder than the rest.
Like the weight of the earth is on my shoulders.
Easily swayed by my very desires.
But all those desires have done have betrayed me.

I won't be used anymore.
All you have done is give me more strength.
The pain you have thrown at me.
You don't have to notice me now.

You will soon.

-End.-

Hm. o-o; That's it..
I'm not such a great poet...
But, I just wanted to get my thoughts down.

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