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MoOnLigHt
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Talking Question:suspended-

Hi pplz! my internet broke down so i wasnt able to post for a while but here...i wrote this about 2 weeks ago...

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Why do obstacles stand in your way
whenever you try to live a better day
why do you always run out of time to say
the words you desire, before you turn to clay

why do the loved ones quickly leave
when all the bullies remain and tease
they lock the door and take away the keys
and among the people the tensions never ease

Why is it that society must kill
innocent men, for their own bad will
do we really have to wait until
the game is over and the world is still

Why does the world only want A's and B's
when people can do so much with C's and D's
Don't they realize that all of these
things are not done by individual "ME"'s

How come when people see a shooting star
they don't recognize any others afar
why do people never know who they are
But instead of learning, only smoke tar

Why do people listen to [Fur Elyse]
when they dont even care what it means
For peace the world would never plead
Only for greed, perhaps personal needs

Why does the battle never end
when if they cared, flowers they can send
Why can't ourselves a little bit bend
To let in the humanity and personally blend

Why do they think it's only bad luck sent
when it's really a sign for them to repent
Did they really not know what it meant
Or were they just pretending to be ignorant

How come the lazy world never looks
Forward to working but believe in luck
How come all the good things are for granted took
and at the hardwhips their heads are shook

Why do I ask these questions here
and still no answers arrive for years
Do i just have to wipe away the tears
and wait for the end that each second nears

Why do obstacles stand in your way
whenever you try to live a better day
answer this question and yes i may
answer all others suspended in your head

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OMG.. Erin.. again.. that is another really good piece of work... I think you should make a book of poems... seriously, they're all so serious and good... everytime I see a post from you, I know it's gonna be good so I read it...

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Nojeel
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very very nice...very impressive :thumbup:

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MellowYellow
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Originally posted by RaCeR_LaDi_MoOn
OMG.. Erin.. again.. that is another really good piece of work... I think you should make a book of poems... seriously, they're all so serious and good... everytime I see a post from you, I know it's gonna be good so I read it...


yea same here... whenever i see a post by you i know it's a really great piece so i read it....


this one is really good too....

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