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poem..

WHY..
Why can`t i get over you?
Why do i still care?
Why did i take for granted
The times when you were there?
Why can`t i go on?
Why can`t i let you go?
Why do i still think about you?
You have to let me know
I`d cry to myself for hours
Trying to fall asleep
Thinking of these feelings
That shouldnt be running so deep
I look at the tears that are falling
Thinking i shouldnt be letting them fall
Thinking this isnt a good reason for crying
Thinking you never loved me after all
I`m thinking of these things
That are unfortunately true
But what i think about most
Is how i still love you

heres another one....

PASSIONS
Love for me i knoe you feel
but i just cant believe its real
i've been lied to, torn, and played
thought as a fake, worthless, and betrayed
told iw as loved to have them turn around
slap me wit words, kicking me to da ground
almost everyone who claimed that dey love me true
played me like a clown, now i cant believe you
when you say you love me if even a bit
all my emotions gather into a fit
bringing pain, bringing memories, bringing silent tears
forcing my mind to enter all those past years
i've known only one who'se stuck around through it all
whose never betrayed me and took every fall
whose never for a minute turned his back when i cried
never for a second betrayed me or lied
he holds a piece of my heart so storng and so true
a peice of my heart i'm afraid to give you
becauase dey all said exactly what you tell me now
but dey left me somewhere, soetime, somehow
i'm like a toy when it comes to love's games
and deres only one whose truly remained da same
i knoe i grow annoying when i just cant believe
but understand no one my heart can relieve
from da pain das been buried and repeats in my mind
why you say i love you i fear you'll leave me behind
go on to love another as been done to me before
meet another person and lvoe dem so much more
just decide i'm worthless, call me such and weak
pound my soul to peices, make me believe i'm a freak
i've been played so bad, so much in da past
dat when you say i love you i knoe it wont last
when you say i love you, i hear all those screams
when you say i love i dream shattered dreams
words went so deep dat when you tell me i'm gold
i hear it from their lips, a line das so old
knoe i lvoe you to pieces but i'm just so afraid
all but once dat i have my heart iwas destroyed and iw as played
so when i say i love you knoe it takes real strength
and when i say i believe you
i take unimaginable length
know when you ask me whats wrong and i start to cry
knoe it tooke me da world even to try
just knoe i cant talk anymore cuz it hurts too bad
so dont ask too many questions when my eyes look sad
when you say i lvoe you know deep down i try
to believe every word but it leads me to cry
cuz hearing i love you brings me bak to da past
and all those i love yous dat just couldnt last
when u say i love you look into my eyes
you'll see understanding dat pain cant disguise

mah friends wrote both of em..da 2nd one is kinda long and repeats itself..and sum lines dont make sense..but its more than i could do .. so yea

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hey that's pretty cute

whoa so many rhymes... haha

give your friends a thumbs up on that one~

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