something i wrote wen i was reminded of someone...................
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theres somebody, out there for me,
just let me open, my eyes to see.
all the beauty that u possess,
all my feelings i have to express.

my inspirations come from ur beauty,
no words can explain, just what u are.
ur so appealing, both inside and out,
thats why im feelin u without any doubt.

girl u got me, straight to my heart,
girl i felt u, right from the start.
u intrigued me, with ur lifestyle,
i get so ecstatic, wenever you'd smile.

how did u ever, get to my weakness,
something about you, ur just so amazing.
all about you, about your uniqueness,
got me feeling, feeling amazing.

all this time, ill be waiting for you,
ill keep on waiting, if this feeling's true.
my only prayer, is for you to be glad,
ill wipe the tears, wenever ur sad.

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Last edited by merdawg on 01-28-2003 at 03:27 AM

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aww that was so nice. It sounds like you really care about that person ....when you read it...it makes u feel all happy inside...u got talent!! Tell me again when u post another poem i enjoyed reading it~!!

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Originally posted by MasWusHot
aww that was so nice. It sounds like you really care about that person ....when you read it...it makes u feel all happy inside...u got talent!! Tell me again when u post another poem i enjoyed reading it~!!

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lol...thnx... i guess ur the only person that likes it.

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YEAH AJ THE BEST THING I EVER READ!!! just wanted u to feel better ... lol jk it was really good... keep posten

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lol ted. AJ ! ! ! may i ask who this special litto girl may be??
oy . . that was beautiful ::sniff::sniff:: brought a tear to my eye.

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yea ... all the poems that you've written are all really good ... and it's always about " some girl " ... hmmm very mysterious indeed ..

well whoever this muse must be has definently inspired your work ...

keep it up!

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lol ted. AJ ! ! ! may i ask who this special litto girl may be??
oy . . that was beautiful ::sniff::sniff:: brought a tear to my eye.

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lol... I KNOW WHO IT'S FOR!!!... actually i don't... is it for me?

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u intrigued me, with ur lifestyle,

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hhahaahaa....NO

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