i did it in a minute so its wack i knoe haha but o well critisize all u want i dunt care haha


i hate niggas liek u who always talkin shyt
but wen it come down to d real shyt u can't back up the thinks u say
i hate cowards like u always hidin behind a weapon think ur tough
but deep in side ur a scared little nigga who can't step up to his problems and work dat shyt out
yea...people made guns, and guns do kill, but its cowards like u who pulls a trigga and ends thousands or more lives every year
Nothing in life is worth dying for but yet ur ego is to high to let shyt slide
u end a person's life leaving families in tears
What is up wit pplz in dis world where people have to kill?
Will dis shyt ever stop, nah i dunt think dat'll ever be cuz those cowards can't step up and handle things on his or her own.

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cool, it would be better if you had a rhyme scheme or some metaphors in there . just a suggestion.

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cool, it would be better if you had a rhyme scheme or some metaphors in there . just a suggestion.

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yea i knoe i knoe i could do better but hey it took up one minute of my bordom haha

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haha saym with myne! but you ain bad mayun! do more!

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haha saym with myne! but you ain bad mayun! do more!

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i'm too lazy
i come out wit good flows once a month i come up wit scratchy flows 2 weeks ina month puahaha i used to be ella intoit battling helal ppl but got tired

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i C... well if you get bored enuff to write sum more den post it mayun!! at jji?! ^^

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nething for u hahaha

yea y not i'll post wutever i feel like it onc ein a while lol

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haha~ yay!

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