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WhiteLee
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Cold Hands

These hands have destroyed many, causing too many casualties and wounds.
These hands have caused the sadness of others who are in pain about they're losses.
These hands should not be touched for if so, that person who cared for them will be crushed and perish painfully.
These hands were not meant for such abuse. They were meant for peace, truth, and justice. Yet, what is the meaning of peace, truth, or justice, if the living cannot understand it?
Those hands are weak and tired of the work they've been put through. Tirelessly working to kill and contradict others, yet their owner does not even look at his own contradictions or sins.
These hands are useless. They have no use and should be banished forever.
These hands are saddened. Saddened by their failings.
These hands are in despair and hope to not gain the love or caring of another, fearing the death of them caused by his hands.
These hands are cold. Warmth does not fill them. They are not worthy of love or comfort.
Again, these hands are cold…who will warm them?

Will you warm my hands?

I wrote this a loooooooooong time ago. Kinda has refers to GW's Zechs a little.
tell me what ya think.

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wow that's pretty good...but i don't really understand it? what's GW?

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WhiteLee
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GW=Gundam Wing. An anime.

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