a little something i wrote after chilling with my friend... a lil background on it... i was sitting in my friends car waitin for him to finish up droppin off his Gf... well i looked into the rear view mirror and saw a scary figure all shady and stuff... this was around 10, and i wasn't exactly in the safest of neighborhoods... so it inspired me to write this...


The Shade

a lonesome night i spend alone
in the car i sit, from my friends disown
my eyes tire, strange images are prone
lurching and swaying, a figure moans

i look up into the rearview mirror
a ghastly shade, a silhouette of terror
i look again to see it hobble a bit nearer
rubbing my eyes i look to find the invader

shocked and confused thinking it a dream
the figure gone, what could it mean?
panic stricken, where is this fiend?
the frost clouds my sight, my senses not so keen

and the shade appears, an appirition
my breathing defines my despiration
and then i think, "the light!" a grand invention
it shines so bright, banishing by divine intervention

to my relief the demon is gone
evil cannot exist where the light is on
or was it an image from my head it spawn
but i'll never know i'll wait for the relief of dawn


... ahh the ending is kinda weak but i'll work on something...

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wow realli good....very unique.....hehe keep writing more

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I Don't know what is wrong, what is right
It makes no difference, they are the same things...
I don't know what to believe in, whom i can trust
There was no way to see, no way to prove that
Why do I have to wonder and wonder?
I don't know why, I don't know why, I don't know why
I don't know who my friends are, who my enemies are
They love me some, they cheat me some in the same way
Why do I have to live with them, why do I love them?
I really wish I could believe in your sweet sweet lies
I close my eyes and tears are falling
I really wish I could live alone with no one at all
I close my heart and dreams are tumbling
Sing, sing a fool's song I am a king without a kingdom
LaLaLa, I am a mother without a womb for my children
LaLaLaLa, I am a lover without a lover
oh..I am a foolish clown of the world..
I am a foolish clown of the world...

So.. I don't know what to believe in, Whom to rely on...
-Jaurim

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