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betrayed faith

http://student.ucr.edu/~tlau001/mus..._Faith_-160.mp3

order:
whojong
kray j
iam
t5oul (thats me)

chorus:
whojong
t5oul

this was my second time recording...tell me what you guys think

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Quality is kind of off and the singing needs a little bit of work. Sounds like the singer kind of got tired at the end of the chorus. Nice voice, though. Real soothing. The talker and singer need to work together to make the transitions smooth.

Flow and delivery was nice. Some parts needed more emotion. I like kray j's tone.

Overall it's a nice track. It was a little bit too slow for me, but the track itself was quite good.

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the singer just came back from korea the other day..i think hes got sars or something, been coughing like crazy

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hmm...quality was eh, buts iz coo. beat was nice. first emcee, flow was coo, delivery could use more emotion?
i liked da chorus. sounds pretty good. i think the singer needed to be louder?
2nd emcee came nice. he got a nice flow and delivery
3rd emcee was aiight. he has that monotone kinda style i think
nice verse, some more emotion wouldnt hurt.

i like the lyrics, songs pretty coo. i like. 2nd emcee hit da hardest. good stuff.

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all of us are newbies at this...cept the 2nd guy..hes beeing doing it for a long time, hes friends with jtek and they used to be in vt-1 together

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question tea...what is the song on your homepage in your signature? really like that beat

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its moonbeat by ltj bukem, the greatest drum and bass MASTERRRRR

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i liked it...good mix of 3 different MC's.

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actually, there are 4

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i meant the rappers...i'm juss stuck in a hip-hop state of mind...even tho all dem r MC's...heh

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yeah thats what i mean...there are 4 rappers LOL

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eh...4?

must be losin it...

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^ LOL

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yo ess3encE you want to lose semething battle me straight up

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shocker, dont fill up old threads, if your post is directed to someone, private message them

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aiight my bad tea

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