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saranghae
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my poem

its one of those one word poems... haha... i knoe its not that good


Love

A
mere
thought
can
turn
into
a
crush

A
simple
crush
may
evolve
into
like

Like
can
go
throught
many
levels

From
like
to
really
like
to
really,
really
like.

Finally
it
blossoms
into
love.

However
it
may
slowly
wither
into
hatred.

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hmm... interesting....

*interesting in a GOOD way... *

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Nojeel
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not bad..not bad at all

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Ladi Jay
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plain and simple! nice nice... and can be true!

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LiLboy
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always possible~ nice poem ^^

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nice poem :thumbup: its nice n simple n not much letters

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XxAzNViPeRBoIxX
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simple n clean

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TyGer STyLe
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quote:
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simple n clean
UTADA HIKARU!!! puahaha... naw... that is pretty good... nice... it seems very... Hmm lemme see... Spartan... haha... not my style but it works!

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