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aiite.. good luck to yoo too mann.. ahaha mah rhymes are goin to be hella lame so dun worriee. so who gonna start.. im waiting it off alil fer now.. wen mah parentz are asleep.. so i can get full concentration. haha yea and i wuz forced to join.. cuz of jon hyung.. argh!! haha

victim of no one/the showdone in round one is over
lookin over my shoulder, shootin first
watch your car burst in flames
as i put you to shame/ realize
this aint a game, never got recognized
so now your searchin for fame
but you always sound the same/ thats fucking lame
shot yo ass up/ you feelin the pain
and you, walking with canes
physical therapy and psychiatry appointments
cant help the trauma i brought to you when my rhymes vent
sit down and withhold your crown/of bein a silly whackass mc rhymin clown

round two/its time for the second half
yo' skippity lines are my makin' me laugh
don't even know why you tryin' to flow against me
couldn't spit "hot bars" even if you were over limited "degree"
be memorized by my undeniable lyrical technique
my words are treasured foreva' like a priceless antique
your wastin' my time/but yo my entertainment
nothin' mo' fun then leavin' crackas' mindly contaminated
imprint my rhymes like a tat/as a symbol of my victory ova' you
conquered my enemy with ease/now that-is-t r u e

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my vote goes for jon --

jon's verses flowed better and had better rhyme schemes, and he also had better metaphors. but good job to both... keep up the great work.

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thanx huby40

Vote - Jon

Both emcees were ill, but i dont like da way andrew kept rhymin to da same word...but das jus me. And i think Jon had betta metaphors. Good shit...keep uppin

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i liked jon hyungs flows.. i wish i can flow like that..

vote - Nojeel

mah vote goes to andrew
gl :thumbup:

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both did good job, but nojeel had tighter flow 'n came harder wit his punches.

VOTE - Nojeel

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es·sence (n.) -
1. The intrinsic or indispensable properties that serve to characterize or identify something.

2. The most important ingredient; the crucial element.

juss watch how my lyrics make dis kid a real paboh-4-life/
like petey pablo-recites 'Y'all Ain't Ready' i rob-yo-ass-on-sight/
u juss anotha frontin MC labeled Miscellaneous Crap/
even wit tha help of Reynolds, u still couldn't Wrap/ (Reynolds Wrap)
so i dunno wut makes u think u can stay-fresh/
i prey-on-flesh, takin less than a day-to-digest/
which leaves time to show yo tru self...u ARE shit/
u couldn't come hard if u wuz in sex flicks/
son, i ain't like yo dick, no way u could put ur hand on dis/
polish yo technique, chisel yo lyrical physique, make it unique/
it won't help, cuz like 14 days dis kid is too weak/ (two week)

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es·sence (n.) -
1. The intrinsic or indispensable properties that serve to characterize or identify something.

2. The most important ingredient; the crucial element.

yoo messin wit me
i bring yoo down from step to step
like one two three
yoo said yoo should be hatin
yoo jus jealous cus yoo hate tha position that im in
i dun kno why yoo steppin eitha
i jus cant flow cuz i aint black eitha
yoo aint even got anythin on me tho
wuht yoo frontin fo
im jus spittin mah flo
i cant even put on a show
it wuz onliee like an hour ago
that i wuz spinnin on tha floor
breakin like a pro
buh cuz i suk, im jus gon go pik on AL's Fro!!
cuz his hairs jus extra tight
hes got that extra might
haha he'll giv yoo that extra fright
jus that otha day
i think it wuz a friday
sum guy wuz trippinm jus hatin mah ways
in sum ways i thought like a soulja
buh i knew this guy is goin to be ova
buh thas jus tha way i am.
i aint perfect, hell no one is.
i jus take it and BLAM!!



ahahahahah so lame.. hell it wuz my first shot. wuhtever i tried haha

andrew!!!!

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john iz better, sry andrew

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wwoow goot jobb :D har har..


weeeee.. i kant flow fer ish :x

haha iz coo, betta den anythang i could do....da first few bars sounds like lines from jinz "i dont know" song...oh well. heres my wack shit


Yo yo yo...
You comin up in here tryin to step to me//
Jus step back down cuz u aint shit to me//
Cuz i be J-D, da emcee, who ya be son//
Ya cant compare ta me, i aint scared of no one//
My verbal laceration will cut your linez to confetti//
Linez so hot, dey'll leave ya ass all sweaty//
My lyrical rhymez will stun you//
Rhymez so ill, dey'll give ya da flu//
My verbal attack will leave you blue and frozen//
Stop copyin Jinz rhymez cuz ya style iz jus posin//
I be keepin it real in da south-west//
If you dont like dis shit, ill put a round to ur chest//
Im da master, your the apprentice//
Ive already won, its no contest//



lol talk about straight out wackness...gl Aaron...i kno ull win.

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hell no.. that aint no Jin
get tha shit right, yoo sayin im posin??
learn wuht yoo spittin
i pop yoo in tha face before i even start cursin
get your stuph straight before yoo be dissin
yoo think im flippin
hell nah.. im jus comin in notorious
cuz ima make me floetry flowtorius
and watch me ima leave victorious
ima rookie mc
ima noob, got me??
i cant make it anymore easie
cuz comin straight outta tha jerzee
aint goin to help me
this is mah first year
still comin straight down here wit no fear
watch me ima rep til yoo show tear
and i bring yoo down right here
get mah flow clear
clean out and use your ears
and get your roles straight yoo hear!!


hahahahhaa.. damnzz.. mah last one fer now i guess.. good thing itz onlie 2 cuz i cant keep embarrassing mahself like this.. aiite your last flow too J.. good luck!! yo damnzz yoo got tightass flows.. haha im unexperienced in this.. yoo'll get me.. yooo kno yoo won haha

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Originally posted by Street RSX
hahahahhaa.. damnzz.. mah last one fer now i guess.. good thing itz onlie 2 cuz i cant keep embarrassing mahself like this.. aiite your last flow too J.. good luck!! yo damnzz yoo got tightass flows.. haha im unexperienced in this.. yoo'll get me.. yooo kno yoo won haha

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5-1 keep dose votes comin!

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oshitt that wuz tight!! haha.. ouchiezz.. jus freakin hurt me like that.. pshhh.. hahahaha good luck to yoo too man.. now it all depends on tha voting!!

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Originally posted by Street RSX
oshitt that wuz tight!! haha.. ouchiezz.. jus freakin hurt me like that.. pshhh.. hahahaha good luck to yoo too man.. now it all depends on tha voting!!

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Originally posted by J-DraGoNz



haha thanks, no hard feelinz

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