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Girl of my Dreams

something i wrote during church....it prolly sux cuz i wrote it in 5 minutes.

Girl of My Dreams

Incoherence hits me when you're close,
Ur beauty had love wishing it could just boast,
When I’m with you, I feel happy the most.
Thinking about you is like an ecstasy overdose.
You are the girl I’ve been looking for,
Forever in my heart, you will I store.
The distance between us makes me long for you more.
I hope I am the guy that u will adore.
When the sun sets, I feel alright,
Cuz I only see you in the beauty of night.
I know it may be sudden, but to me it seems,
You are the girl, the girl of my dreams.

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"Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. " - Bruce Lee

thats good! keep writing! ^_^ puahahaha

aw i really liked that one~!! It was so sweet and i love things that rhyme lol keep writing~!!

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