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quick freestyle keystyle

a quick freestyle i did check it.


So much shit to complicate//
Too many things to contemplate//
All this shit, i just cant take//
So many decisions i have to make//
I wish all of this was jus all fake//
Lord, i ask you jus please wait//
I need more time, i need today//
Jus wanna get up n get away//
Livin day to day, only the strong will survive//
All alone in dis world, no one to help me stay alive//
In Orange County we hit da blunt till we ease the pain//
Everyday nothing changes, its always all the same//
My life so poor i jus need some healthy change//

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Re: quick freestyle keystyle

good stuff man...

the only part that i was kinda thrown off by was

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In Orange County we hit da blunt till we ease the pain//

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man, why everyone sleepin on me yo....das hella jacked. if u dont like it, say so, dont jus look n leave...actually most of u dont even look -_- i hate u all! fo realz tho...im sad

everyone sleepin on my ghetto song n my poems n freestylez damn...and all the tourniez i set up geezzz wats wit dat ya'll hate me or somethang.

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Originally posted by J-DraGoNz
man, why everyone sleepin on me yo....das hella jacked. if u dont like it, say so, dont jus look n leave...actually most of u dont even look -_- i hate u all! fo realz tho...im sad

everyone sleepin on my ghetto song n my poems n freestylez damn...and all the tourniez i set up geezzz wats wit dat ya'll hate me or somethang.

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alwayz heylla goot flows josh posh! i love u! eEe! im ur byggest fan~ puhaha!

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