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Paintbush

I keep my paintbrush with me,
Wherever I may go,
In case I need to cover up,
So the real me doesn't show.

I'm so afraid to show me to you,
Afraid of what you'll do,
That you might laugh or say mean things,
I'm afraid I might lose you.
I'd like to remove all of my paint coats,
To show you the real, true me,
But I want you to try and understand,
I need you to accept what you see.

Now my coats are all stripped off,
I feel naked, bare and cold,
And if you still love me with all that you see,
You're my friend pure as gold.

I need to keep my paintbrush with me,
And hold it in my hand.
I want to keep it handy,
In case somebody doesn't understand.
So please protect me, my dear friend
And thanks for loving me true.
But I need to keep my paintbrush with me,
Until I love me too.

that poem was sooo good ~~~ I loved it hehe .. wow that was so sweet and it was written so nicelyy .. keep writing

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that was kikass!

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wow... I *really* liked it I liked the point you were trying to make, by making people understand who you really are...

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"Fear less, hope more;
Whine less, breathe more;
Talk less, say more;
Hate less, love more;
And all good things are yours."

-Sweedish Proverb


aim: MaGiKToToRo
xanga: MaGiKToToRo

This is still really good

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"Fear less, hope more;
Whine less, breathe more;
Talk less, say more;
Hate less, love more;
And all good things are yours."

-Sweedish Proverb


aim: MaGiKToToRo
xanga: MaGiKToToRo

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Originally posted by MaGiKToToRo
This is still really good

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lol i just noticed it says "paintbush"

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its better to lose a lover, than to love a loser