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Things just don't work out, Like how I want them to be

Hmm, I was really bored today so I just decided to write a poem... it really sucks though... I haven't written a poem for like three years now buh I still sucked then, so here you go...

Every time we built up our relationship strong, she would appear and shatter it all
With many other problems, you made her one
You set her as an obstacle, a barrier, a wall, anything to block the becoming of us
I always wondered why you made her a hindrance, but that can be answered easily
She meant and still means more to you, more than Ill ever be
But things just dont work out, like how I want them to be

I shouldnt have rushed things, better yet, got myself into this situation
But when it came to you, I fell with a mere "Hello"
You had that unique feature, something that others didnt have
You made me smile and laugh, you cheered up my days,
Made me want to hold you firm, cuddle up with you and fall asleep
But things just dont work out, like how I want them to be

Now Ive made my choice, I have decided
It is my decision to move on, but its so hard to do so
Yet its so difficult to stay because I know that shell always recur, and youll turn back to her
I keep asking myself if I should reconsider, because I do want something between us
I dont want to lose what I had with you, or what I will have with you
But things just dont work out, like how I want them to be

Even though Ive settled to move on, Im sure Ill remember you
Because you meant most things to me, if not all
I hope at least youll remember me, not just as a rebound but for other reasons too
If there is ever an us, Ill make sure that there is no obstacle, barrier, or wall
But
...things just dont work out, like how I want them to be...

deng..lost love..and the want for love from that individual..very nice poem jewels..keep up the good writing :thumbup:

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whee everyone is showing off their writing talent... except me. lol and i'm the mod.. i just really enjoy reading them thas all.. modding just makes it so i have to read them all. cuz i would have read them all anyway. lol... i think to be a good writer you have to have something that inspires/motivates you.. someone.. somthing..... but i don't think i have anything that impacted me that much to do that.... maybe i'm just not a good writer.. lmao... how can you have writer's block before you start writing.. haha


well anyway...good job julie :thumbup: .. that's a long title...

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wow julie..that was good......see you are a good writer although you refuse to admit it.......hehe ......well keep writing more..... i have to write more soon.........just got lazy lately

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I Don't know what is wrong, what is right
It makes no difference, they are the same things...
I don't know what to believe in, whom i can trust
There was no way to see, no way to prove that
Why do I have to wonder and wonder?
I don't know why, I don't know why, I don't know why
I don't know who my friends are, who my enemies are
They love me some, they cheat me some in the same way
Why do I have to live with them, why do I love them?
I really wish I could believe in your sweet sweet lies
I close my eyes and tears are falling
I really wish I could live alone with no one at all
I close my heart and dreams are tumbling
Sing, sing a fool's song I am a king without a kingdom
LaLaLa, I am a mother without a womb for my children
LaLaLaLa, I am a lover without a lover
oh..I am a foolish clown of the world..
I am a foolish clown of the world...

So.. I don't know what to believe in, Whom to rely on...
-Jaurim

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Originally posted by MoOnLigHt
wow julie..that was good......see you are a good writer although you refuse to admit it.......hehe ......well keep writing more..... i have to write more soon.........just got lazy lately

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Originally posted by RaCeR_LaDi_MoOn


OMG Erin... you're poems kick my butt by far... buh inspiration is all I need!!! hahaha... I'm not good with poems at all though... that poem took me an hour! and it's not even good. doesn't even sound like a poem.

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I Don't know what is wrong, what is right
It makes no difference, they are the same things...
I don't know what to believe in, whom i can trust
There was no way to see, no way to prove that
Why do I have to wonder and wonder?
I don't know why, I don't know why, I don't know why
I don't know who my friends are, who my enemies are
They love me some, they cheat me some in the same way
Why do I have to live with them, why do I love them?
I really wish I could believe in your sweet sweet lies
I close my eyes and tears are falling
I really wish I could live alone with no one at all
I close my heart and dreams are tumbling
Sing, sing a fool's song I am a king without a kingdom
LaLaLa, I am a mother without a womb for my children
LaLaLaLa, I am a lover without a lover
oh..I am a foolish clown of the world..
I am a foolish clown of the world...

So.. I don't know what to believe in, Whom to rely on...
-Jaurim

wow

realli good
raised alot of good points about things
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