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Ess3ncE - Life

a yo, new song. used Mobb Deep's "Hell on Earth" beat...thas y i made reference to it on tha first lines of this song.


Ess3ncE - Life

HOOK
this life we live is full of happiness, stress 'n sorrow/
can't deal wit today, u become obsessed wit tomorrow/
sunny days ahead, but there's always clouds in the sky/
there's no point in runnin, we juss scream loud 'n cry/

this life we live is funny cuz we strive to many things/
consumed by greed 'n power, i juss wanna spread my wings/
'n fly away from all this, no more pain 'n sufferin/
enough of them, i wanna git away from tha stuff i'm in/


VERSE 1
shit is Deep, been part of a Mobb since birth/
each step we takin, dis ain't livin, dis is hell on earth/
but wut can't kill me can only make me stronger/
so i guess i'ma stick around juss a lil longer/
street dreams, lifestyles of tha rich 'n famous/
when we on top, cats juss wanna bitch 'n frame-us/
same cats take u down after helpin u reach tha top/
strippin down everythin that each of us got/
we civilized, yet so quick to kill for the green/
tha dead girl on TV? damn, Jill was thirteen/
tha way i see it, we all must be standin crazy/
turn on tha news, anotha dead abandoned baby/
a life wasted cuz sumone was too scared or lazy/
dunno why or how nobody could've cared but mayb/
we're all juss murderous and suicidal/
lookin for the quickest way to death, rather than survival/
underage drinkers drinkin till they pass out, thoughts relapse/
smokers smokin till tha day they gaspin, gotta collapse/
tha way i see it, we must be brainwashed, deceived/
blinded by our dark desires squashed wit greed/
societies trashin minds wit materialistic needs/
life's already harsh, keep it simplistic please/


HOOK


VERSE 2
i took a step bak, looked at life 'n its events/
decisions, the paths i took presents 'n prevents/
me from goin bak to tha way things once were/
a big blur...shit, it's been months it occured/
juss can't seem to focus 'n think straight no more/
but juss listen to wut i have to say before/
your thoughts decide to judge me for my actions/
i find no satisfaction, i ain't lookin for reactions/
each day passes, i'm slowly dyin on tha inside/
life's so weary i gave it up, had Death eyed/
it looked me up 'n down, asked for an explanation/
i'm tired of temptations, anger, and frustrations/
but it said Death's not an invitation nor salvation/
from my troubles, thas how it ends my conversation/
so i'm askin God please forgive me for wut i've done/
from shit said 'n itchin to blast a foo wit a gun/
i seem to be lost, blinded lookin for tha light/
like 'Pac, i'm doin me, wut i believe is right/
gittin back on my feet cuz i've feel a-lot/
come wit me Hail Mary cuz it's dark 'n hell's-hot/

HOOK x2

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es·sence (n.) -
1. The intrinsic or indispensable properties that serve to characterize or identify something.

2. The most important ingredient; the crucial element.

need some comments.

don't care if it's negative/positive.

pick it apart if u want...only way i'll b better. heh

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es·sence (n.) -
1. The intrinsic or indispensable properties that serve to characterize or identify something.

2. The most important ingredient; the crucial element.

uppin for comments..... JSL lyricism is dead...

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es·sence (n.) -
1. The intrinsic or indispensable properties that serve to characterize or identify something.

2. The most important ingredient; the crucial element.

^^ LOL sorry...damn ive been so busy with skoo n shit.

i like dis beat...bandit AP and CB used this beat for their "enemy down" collab

hook sounds good..maybe a lil louder could be nice. (on da hook)
ya delivery was nice, flow was aiight. lyrics were coo.
your lyricism aspect is your strongest point

Hook sounds da best. ya flow on da hook is tight.

good shit

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