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heaven and hell

I had on new clothes,
New sneaks on my feet.
I was there for class on time,
Went to the back and took my seat.
Yeah, I'm moving up,
I'm already grown.
Soon I'll be graduating,
And out on my own.
I talked to some of my friends,
We were all having fun.
Said some things I shouldn't have said,
Did stuff I shouldn't have done.
I knew I was different.
I felt God touch my heart,
I knew I should set a standard,
But then I'd be set apart.
Walking to the bus,
I was not looking for strength.
I heard the car tires screeching,
But now it's too late.
I'm standing in this room,
And I can see the heavenly gate.
Oh no! I never prayed.
I thought I had time to get it straight,
An angel walked to me,
He had a book in his hand.
I knew it was the Book of Life,
When would this dream end?
I told him my name,
And he began to look.
Then he looked at me sadly and said,
Your name is not in this book.
Angel, this is a dream,
No, I can't be dead!
He closed the book and turned away, Ahead.
No...no this can't be real,
Angel, you can't turn me away.
Let me talk to God,
Maybe he'll let me stay.
He led me to the gate,
Jesus came to me.
He did not let me in but said,
Beloved what is your need?
Jesus, I cried, please,
Don't cast me away from you.
Tears ran down his face as he said,
You knew what you needed to do.
Lord, please I'm young,
I never thought I would die.
I thought I'd have plenty of time,
Death caught me by surprise.
Lord, I went to church,
Please Jesus, I believe.
He said you would not accept me,
My love you would not receive.
Lord, there were too many hypocrites,
They weren't being true.
He took a step back and asked,
What does that have to do with you?
Lord, my family claimed to be saved,
They weren't real. You know.
He said, I died for you,
Now I have to go.
I fell to my knees crying to Him,
Lord, I planned to be real tomorrow.
I couldn't, make Him understand,
I had never-felt such sorrow.
Then it hit me hard, I said,
Lord, where will I go?
He looked into my eyes and said, my child you already
know.
Please Jesus, I begged,
The place is so hot.
It seemed to trouble and grieve him,
He whispered, DEPART FROM ME,
I KNOW YOU NOT.
Lord, you're supposed to be love me,
How can you send me to damnation?
He replied, With your mouth you said you loved me,
But each day you rejected my salvation.
With that in an instant, Day turned into night.
I never knew such torture could be, now it's too late,
I know the Bible is right.
If I can tell you anything, Hell has no age.
It is a place of torture, separated from God and full
of rage.
You know, I thought it was a funny joke, but this one
thing is true.
If you never accept Jesus Christ, HELL IS WAITING FOR
YOU!

So please, ask Him into your heart.



i thot i'd share this with you guys...but personally, i don't think this would happen. i mean yeah, Christians are supposed to strive to be like Jesus, but God knows they are imperfect and shouldn't be so hard on them...i think this poem makes it sound like no normal person is going to get into heaven. i'm not one to judge what's fair and what isn't, but wouldn't you think that most people get into heaven? that the majority if people aren't evil, and that their intentions are good? i always believed God to be merciful and kind and forgiving. are only the nearly-perfect ones going to be saved? what about everyone else who isn't bad, but isn't perfect?

i don't think perfection is required...but sincerity is...goodness too...