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Some of my stuff

I haven't written for some time, but I got out some of my old stuff and would like your input on it.

Man in the Moon
Looking up at you in the sky
I can never tell a lie
Shining your light down on me
Feeling your glow is my destiny...
Tonight I look up four you
But no one is in the avenue
I knew this night would be coming soon
But I still want to see the moon!
I'll close my eyes early tonight
For tommorrow you'll be shining bright

(this poem was about a lunar eclipse)

Violation
You violated my trust
You violated our love
You ask how?
You violated my mind
You violated our faith
You know how!
YOU VIOLATED ME!!!!

Family
My family is a time bomb
I am the clock
Waiting impatiently
My father is the dynamite
Ready to explode
My brothers are the wires
That set the dynamite off
My mother is the avenger
That prepares all of the elements

(I think now my mother is the dynamite as well )

No Title
Where am I?
Darkness encloses me
What am I doing here?
Am I dead....
.....in heaven......
......or hell......
Why can I not touch anything
Where is everyone
I look up
I look down
And see nothing
What is happening to me
I should feel lost
I should feel scared
I should feel desperate for light
.................but I dont.
(this poem was my experience when my brother choked me)

Ok. I won't bore you anymore.

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