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kinda poem fo valenteins day...
dosent really rhyme...but....its fo valenteins day.....read my sig....
tell me wat u think....
The general misconception about poems is that they must rhyme... this isn't true at all. Poems have different structures and some, not at all.
It is sweet and all but I can't get past the grammer mistakes. Not that there is anything wrong with that. But I think I talked about it before: People are always on that emotional rollar coaster and that's probably why I'm not very fond of this poem at the moment.
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