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EUNNIE- EVERYDAY STRUGGLE~~LISTen!!!!!!!!!
just wanna give a quick warning..
well obviously mi mic pretty much sux so wenever mi voice got realy high or really loud..i just turned ugly and static blah if you know wat i mean..well i tried my best to fix it..so please just put aside the bad quality and criticize my lyrics and mi singing~! =)
thank you NUKE for helping me out wid everything..you're great!
Subject: EunniE- Everyday STruggle
Message: girls in an abusive relationship..get out!
Artist Name:
lyrics and composed by EunniE
Song Title: Everyday Struggle
Beat: nonsense
Links: Http://www.soundclick.com/eunniestuff/
Lyrics: Everyday Struggle
[Chorus (0:20-0:51)]
The struggle and the pain she was going through
And every other day, the more it grew
Nobody knew (nobody knew)
The more her man would beat on her
The days grew longer, it would still occur
She had to endure (she had to endure)
And all the worth that she knew she had to gain
To set herself free from all the hurt and pain
Would let her find her strength
[1st verse (0:51-1:42)]
It was love at first sight
Since the day that they first met
They would spend each day and night
Talking and laughing and sharing a memory
So that in time, they would make a history
She felt so loved and appreciated
From all the hugs and kisses that he initiated
Weeks and months pass by
The love they shared never seemed to die
But who would have known
That he¡¯d be the one to make her cry
[Chorus (1:43-2:11)]
[2nd verse (2:14-3:05)]
As time past on while they were together
Little did she know ¡®bout the pain that she¡¯d weather
The loving disguise of his was soon unveiled
And the truth to her was slowly revealed
All the happiness was gone in him
Only using her as lights grew dim
He left her so hurt and shaken
So many times was her innocence taken
Her presence to him was soon forsaken
Why can¡¯t she say?
That she¡¯s had enough of the pain
[Chorus (3:06-3:35)]
nice i like it but the mic don't seem so clear and the beats are so loud other than that it's great :D
stop posting.
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Originally posted by screwyou
stop posting.
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Originally posted by EunniE
stop talking
this is really good! you should sign up with a music company and make cd's!
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Originally posted by screwyou
ooo good one
yea like some American Idol ish
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wow! so professional sounding!! nice song! i LOVE the message ur trying to get thru. for all the girls in abusive relationships to get out of them.
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