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another poem..

well this is another poem but i dont know what to call it.....

Boy you got me in a maze
Maybe it's just a phase
I wonder how you would gaze
Maybe now I can laze

This is all my feelings condensed
Maybe I should use common sense
Between me and you is like a fence
I should use more defence

Maybe I should let you go
I should just let my feelings flow
I wish I could have you whole
We're like fire and coal

I wish I could see you
I don't know who
Maybe I could call you boo
I'm just the fool

I care for you
I don't know why
You don't know how hard I try
Maybe we can fly high in the sky

good stuff... kinda conveys how i feel sometimes... haha... but i think its an entirely situation from yours

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nice nice...i like the fire and the coal part. its like wat bruce lee said in my sig

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"Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. " - Bruce Lee

nicee i like it..kinda reminds me of a poem i wrote thats like that hehe..keep writin~!

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its better to lose a lover, than to love a loser

hahaha another one... for who this time i like it like her the fire and coal stuff was good

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Originally posted by AZN Pinoy BOI
hahaha another one... for who this time i like it like her the fire and coal stuff was good

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