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Posted by DEmeant0r on 09-17-2002 12:11 AM:

Competition Winner's hall of fame

HAHA this may seem pathetic, but in the next 2 posts Imma gonna announce the winner of the past two competition winners...

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Posted by DEmeant0r on 09-17-2002 12:13 AM:

The first competition was stupid and only one submitted, but anyhow she did win by default:

Best Love Poem (rYcEPuFf):
the first time i saw you was in class
where you were introducing yourself to me
we were just strangers, so i thought...
thought it was nothing

the second time i saw you was online
where i was wondering when you'd talk to me again
we were friends for awhile, i guessed...
guessed that it didn't really matter

the third time i saw you was after school
where you asked me over prettier girls to be your date
i had been waiting for you, i almost...
almost gave up

the forth time i saw you was at her house
where you were so focused on her perfect smile
that was the first night that i cried...
cried over you

the fifth time i saw you was at my door
where you were the one crying
seeing you like that, i realized...
realized that you still loved me

the sixth time i saw you was at the altar
where you were staring into the sparkling eyes of your bride
but it wasnt me, so i walked...
walked out of your life

the seventh time i saw you was at the cemetery
where you still looked like the man i loved
your days were stolen from you, even more i missed...
missed the times when you held me

the last time i saw you was in my dreams
where you were telling me how beautiful i was
but as much as i wanted to, somehow, i just couldnt...
couldnt believe you......

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Posted by DEmeant0r on 09-17-2002 12:14 AM:

This is the second competition, 2 people submitted anyhow this person won by 1 vote (4-3)

Best rhyming poem (KeN VeRsUs RyU)
my poems dont like to rhyme
they like to take their time
takes special care to grow

my poems might not mean anything
but at least they're not nothing
and maybe you'll hear it flow

my poems are ongoing sentences
with methaphoric substances
but im probably just kidding

my poems make me laugh
cuz this is my first draft
and i can't find words that fit in

my poems are retarded
but at least with this i started
in a contest that no one really favors

my poem's about to end
so wont you be my friend?
i ask you.....wont you be my neighbor?

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Posted by rYcePuFf on 09-20-2002 05:58 AM:

quote:
Originally posted by DEmeant0r
The first competition was stupid and only one submitted, but anyhow he did win by default:
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-_- he?? what made you think i was a he? haha.. unless i was gay or something.. writing about a guy. lol...

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Posted by DEmeant0r on 09-20-2002 04:17 PM:

quote:
Originally posted by rYcePuFf



-_- he?? what made you think i was a he? haha.. unless i was gay or something.. writing about a guy. lol...


lol sorry, my mind sometimes does that, I will rectify that.

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