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Posted by LiLboy on 09-24-2002 01:10 AM:

hmm..another short poem

whatever what may come
whoever it may be
remember there is one
who will always make u see

the light is not far off
the fulfillment not so deep
with time and hope
it will soon be withiin your reach

the past is always present
but the present is not your past
forget that all has become of you
remember to make this moment, last

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Posted by UnisMuiMui on 09-24-2002 01:24 AM:

awwww i like dat poem. nice job! keep it up!

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Posted by saranghae on 09-24-2002 01:26 AM:

awww... how sweet! hehe... i'm gonna put that on my binder... u don't mine do u?


Posted by LiLboy on 09-26-2002 02:46 AM:

:D thanks foe da commentz~

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Posted by anata`dake on 10-14-2002 12:14 PM:

ur poem is nice
the fatc that its a poem is nice
it shows that u've spent a lot of time thinking about issues and stuff, like ur constantly discovering new things
dats why its so hard to write a poem, to be able to express something
that means so much to u in an ambigous way


Posted by MellowYellow on 10-15-2002 08:05 AM:

i like how it rhymes.haha ....

well i like the poem too but yea.....i like how it rhymes

nice :thumbup:

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