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Posted by JeNyA on 12-23-2002 04:55 PM:

sad story ab' luv and friendship

hey guys! wats up ! hehe i just read a poem hehe its fioOone .hehe i donno who wrote it but its so sad and nice hehe hope u`ll like as i do.



"Friends forever," she said.

"Friends forever," he said.

Eight years old and they made
the vow to remain friends forever.

"I need some room," she said.

"I'll back away," he said.

Ten years old and they made the
vow to give each other space.

"Does Tommy like me?" she asked.

"I'll find out," he said.

Twelve years old and he made the
vow to find out if Tommy liked her.

"He doesn't love me anymore," she said.

"He doesn't deserve you," he said.

Fourteen years old and he made
the vow to love her forever.


"Nobody loves me," she said.

"I know someone who does," he said.

Sixteen years old and he made the
vow to love her forever.

"I'm getting married," she said.

"I'll be there," he said.

Eighteen years old and he made the
vow to forever hold his peace.

"I got divorced yesterday," she said.

"I'm here for you," he said.

Twenty years old and he made the
vow to be there for her forever.

"Why doesn't anyone love me," she said.

"I have always loved you," he said.

Twenty-two years old and he made
the vow to keep on loving her.

I could never love you," she said.

"I could never stop," he said.

Twenty-four years old and he made
the vow to never love again.

"I can never see you again," she said.

"I can never live again," he said.

Twenty-Six years old and he
made the vow never to live again.

"I'm sorry," she said.

Love Hurts.


Posted by YaaMaKoh on 12-23-2002 04:58 PM:

aww..d ammm....

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Posted by merdawg on 12-23-2002 05:39 PM:

whoa!! i got the chills after the part where he says, " i can never live again"

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Posted by JeNyA on 12-23-2002 05:41 PM:

mm

quote:
Originally posted by YaaMaKoh
aww..d ammm....
that means u like it or not?


Posted by JeNyA on 12-23-2002 06:16 PM:

Re: mm

quote:
Originally posted by JeNyA
that means u like it or not?

oh hehe i think u do


Posted by Crazydeb8ter on 12-24-2002 02:51 AM:

too bad for the dude

quote:
Originally posted by JeNyA
hehe its fioOone

what a sexy poem

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Posted by sArAnGhAeYo012 on 12-26-2002 08:16 PM:

its saaaaaaaaaad!!! *sniffle*


Posted by Nojeel on 12-27-2002 04:23 AM:

wow...

very moving, sad as well..nice story..keep it up... ^_^

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Posted by azn0monk on 12-30-2002 06:59 AM:

moving


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