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AZN Pinoy BOI
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something...

somethin i wrote just know... i think it's horrible but my sister liked ot so yeah... here it is

just thinking of u makes me wonder....
wutz the point of life with out a lover...
someone to love u, and for them to return
recieve this feeling, inside it burns
with passion, and great feelings to last
something i need, something to have
yet i can't grab hold of it cuz it's never around
like it's up in the sky, and i'm stuck in the ground
i wish u where mine, will it ever be true?
i hope and i wish, that it would b u
to share this feeling with me but why does it seem
that nightmares take over as i rest in my dreams
how i pray to be the one next to u at times and moments
but knowing u'll never like me back, it hurts and it torments
me from the inside and out, knowing ur one of the few
but still... i want to tell u.... that i love u

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awww thats so sweet! keep writin ^_^

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MaGiKToToRo
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That was deep man..... I can relate to it too.... Keep writing cuz

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You think you love her, but you don't.

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if u think hard in ur dreams it might come true.

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quote:
Originally posted by screwyou2
You think you love her, but you don't.

certainly. it may just be an infatuation ted.

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