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SamLee
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Off Tha Top freestyle...

batte-tactics-attack with phantom acts-that's reacts-as hazard/
blastin' asses castin'-to-curse in a fashionable-verse that lack-verbs/
strapped-slurs/lash-burns and backstab-abstracted-wack-words/
if ur askin' for action then fathom tha bashin' and tha passion-i'm-addin' when i'm dashin'-to-work/
mah sequence seem-tense with obscene-dents to those who wanna reach-in/
a battle against me only leaves u in deep-ends but it depends if u wanna stay shallow or seek to deepen/
i don't believe-in-defeats til i see-me-bleedin'/so proceed-in if u wanna retrieve-tha-beast-sleepin'/
i'll be tha reason u need respirators to keep breathin'/
don't step to tha diabolic kid and not expect me to free demons/
that's me freein' of tha top of mah head to tha keys that i'm beatin'/

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KeN VeRsUs RyU
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u guys are pretty good.. damn.. i have to learn

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Bboy Tofu
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Hahahahaha, Tyte.

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Ladi Jay
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Iyah... I really wanna learn this stuff... this is really good...

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SamLee
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ahh, thanx for tha comments..if u wanna learn..i can teach u wat i know..

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Crazydeb8ter
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yea wuz good man, props

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nina skygirl
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Registered: May 2002
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Sam Lee is cool
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lovedontloveme

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Woah, dang. I want your vocabulary /:

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castle outsider
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what the?

sounds like druken tiger to me



dont kill me

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ChiNkyChipMunk
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ahh..dat was nice but boring as hell..
haha..yu gotta have better punchlines..
when i flow i knoe i got tha dopest metaphors..
ones dat make yu go daymmmm...
too bad i dunt no more.. i havnt in longest..
im sour now.. but yeh..yu're aiight

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seung ju
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quote:
Originally posted by ChiNkyChipMunk
when i flow i knoe i got tha dopest metaphors..
ones dat make yu go daymmmm...


lets hear it then.

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Sarang Eh yuri
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a little criticism is all well and good

but, don'y say it's "boring as hell" that's just plain rude especially since you're now "sour"

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SamLee
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hahaha..damn...aight kid..it's all good..say wat u say..i ain't mad..but now u leave me curious..i gotta see ur works..

oh and 'Sarang Eh yuri'...tight sn..Yuri's my favorite also..

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KeN VeRsUs RyU
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samlee you remind me of benefit.. he's good

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