need help with thesis statement asap!!

i'm running out of time for my paper, i've been slacking off too much, so now i need everyone's help. i'm writing a paper on cinderella, it may sound simple but heres' the catch, i read about 6 different versions of cinderella, chinese, native american, african, europeans, etc.. okay i chose chinese and native american, because in those two stories cinderella was an active person so did everything for herself, unlike the other stories where all she did was crr. anyways i have to write a 4-6 paper on why i chose those two essays and how they did with sibling rivalry and explain the purpose of reading the essays to a bunch of 5th graders. someone please help me thanks

Please suggest Thesis Statements only.

Example. Throughout the history of mankind, families has experienced the tension of sibling rivalry. In the tale of the Chinese and Native American,Cinderella, the sibling rivalry displaced a purpose of a disfuntional family. The stories being read to 5th graders would show the importance of family.

Thanks everyone

Alwase,
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thesis statement

The story of Cinderella has been available through many different languages and countries. etc...

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Originally posted by Babu2002
The story of Cinderella has been available through many different languages and countries. etc...

Added on by Alchemist
and it's message has impacted the lives of many. etc...

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