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merdawg
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i think this is good

something i wrote at 2:54AM eastern time

im drowning in my own thoughts,
all tangled up in knots.
answers i search for
but no one opens the door
looks like im by myself waitin for someone
to unravel and make this knot undone.
then maybe i can see the world and breathe again
cuz right now i feel like daniel in the lions den
ppl shoutin, too much stress
atelast i know itll bring out the best
in me that is, cuz im hoping that someone would dare
to help me up so and breathe the air
thats all i need to rest my mind
its that person that i have to find

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iTsmeehLita
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niice ...

just one thing didnt really make sense..

who is the daniel that you were referring to?

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quote:
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who is the daniel that you were referring to?

daniel in the lions den = bible story

not bad tho mdawg, keep it up,

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quote:
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daniel in the lions den = bible story

not bad tho mdawg, keep it up,



yup. thnx for the comments.

i dont know. it just flowed out for some reason

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nice flow
what inspired it?

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nice flow
what inspired it?



all the problems that im going through, and also this girl that i think is the most amazing person in the world.

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