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	 Essence - Yo, shit was str8 nicee... 
The song, *heh* one hell of a nice song..  
but yeah, delivery was straight and untwisted... 
but yo felt lik u were tounge tied for a min?  
you rode the beat but missed a few... keep em commin' ( I WANT THE INSTRUMENTAL!!! ) 
Quallity was excellent 
 
J Dragon- Felt yo lyrics, strong.. deep.. luvin it 
Point proven, song was touching..  
Delivery.. You rap so fast, thats your style 
some words you just slurred in together.. its sall good 
you kept on beat, and the instrumental was nice 
Quallity was excellent 
 
niggoreanboi- first, your audio quality.. isint so great..  
(dont sweat, mines worse,)  
this song wasant for you..  
you should revert back to singing ( you're one hell of a singer ) 
Try stayin on beat, your words were 2 bunched in... 
nice on the bone thugs part.. a tounge twista eh?  
overall, great job 
 
 
Merdawg - WORDS WERE CLEAR AS HELL,  
but it sounded like you were straight readin' 
( i got that problem 2..    ) but yeah 
wheres the animation in your voice?? i liked the song 
the beat was nice and you rocked it over...  
nice double voices...  
Quality was excellent 
 
 
great job fellas.... 
 
vote: Merdawg 
	
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