waitwaitwait....HOLD UP!
i jus went thru tha rhymes y'all wrote.....
heh heh, gettin a bit technical here..
"Harlem heat mc"
fuck u esscence u aint nuthing but a bitch/
-PLAYED!
taking hoes by suprise sucking their dicks/
-WACK! an kinda played
u talk about schocker and talk about nines/
-wtf is this shit?! essence didnt talk bout nines u dumfuck! he was quotin Cannibus.....dumass!
he doesnt have one but i'll be glad to show u mine/
-wack structure...too long!
if u like guys i have a suprise 4 u/
-?!?!?!
his name is lee he's in my classroom/
-too long again! and WACK!
he's a queer he has no nuts/
-uh..
but he likes getting guys in the buts/
-u jus fkn contradict yoself! u say he got no nuts?! then how he "get guys in tha buts"?
overall:HAHAHA! WACK!
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"Shocker"
"hey ho what up/"
-clique sayin callin someone a hoe
you keep talkin shit you get fucked up/
-talkin shit? he didnt even start this beefin!
you talked all this shit but now your wantin to qiute/
-wtf? since wen did he want to quit?! onli thin close to that is that he goin to london fo skoo...
so how come did you get scared what you do see me in your nightmares/
-WACK!
i'll split your head and you keep talkin your gonna wind up dead /
-uh...u gon kill him?
why do you think your bad you aint nothin you cant rap/
-notha wack bar...
your a washed up rapper you keep messin with the mysterious one/
-"washed up rapper" is a gay call....mysterious one? ure nickname?
i'm tellin you you don't even have a gun to back up your shit /
-lol, he dont need a gun....an notha thin...WACK!
so don't talk or your gonna get hit upside your head/
-i dont get this one...."upside your head"?
wit my glock nine i run up on you quick you aint nothin but a bitch
so say your prayers and wish your last wish before yu keep messin/
-half of this dont make sense..."wish your last wish b4 u keep messin"?.....an "i run up on u quick" u run up to someone wit a gun...and?
with the best you'll get fucked up and shot just like the rest of your crew/
-first half dont make sense....
so fuck you you don't know me i'm crazy ill start bustin caps in you.
-dont say shit u cant back up in real life..."bustin caps.."
overall: all i can say is, he is better than Harlem heat mc...
heh heh............n notha thin....dont fkn say shit that u cant fkn bak!
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"essence"
i've heard better nursery rhymes than wut u got-to-say/
YOU forgot-to-pray, i eat soft MC's like u wit no teeth/
he's a candy wrapper cuz his lyrics be so sweet/
dis kid mugz bums for 50-cents so he thinkz he gangsta?/
u ain't no threat talkin shit, he rilly a Wanksta/
so go bak to tha comix, a 2nd rate villain, better yet-u-last/
shocker is better off havin Spider-Man get-his-ass/
-haha! good good....straight bak at him....good punch
i like "he's a candy wrapper cuz his lyrics be so sweet/
dis kid mugz bums for 50-cents so he thinkz he gangsta?/" that was good...
no way u can handle me, i ain't even begun/
must've pissed'em off, cuz now he threatenin wit guns/
but u wanna knoe y he thinks he leaves people wetted?/
cuz he rilly only packin a water gun, git-it?/
yea i said-it, don't let-it git 2 u, don't sweat-it/
it's tha truth 'n u knoe it, i squash-fake-cappers/
u said i can't rap yet say i'm a washed-up-rapper/
-HAHA! i like tha watergun part! good personal....
shocker is fuckin dumb, in dis forum i don't run wit no crew/
but i knoe he don't, HaRlEm HeAt MC~ don't even want u/
dressin up in Asian parades and screamin "i'ma-clown!"/
if u want it, bring it, he a pussy, lips look like a vagina-now/
cuz catz here will have ur limbs all over Philly's Chinatown/
ok hold up...wait u ain't nothin to nobody shocker/
break yo ass off proper, u couldn't kick rhymez if u a rapper playin soccer/
-LOL! good verse! but i tend to disagree man! i reckon he is better than Harlem......
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