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merdawg
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Rhyme...maybe a verse of another song i might record!!!!!

God open my eyes and let me see
the true vision that you have for me,
so set me free and let me feel what i need to feel,
cuz what i need is something pure, something true and real.
so help me deal with my troubles and tribulations
and help unbind me from all of my limitations
to see the factual beauty of your creations,
but don't let it just be my imagination.
I pray to you that my love be reality,
cuz the girls that i felt weren't meant to be,
so i call upon you so you can tell me
will my love be true or just a Casualty.

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sounds pretty good , yeah another song! buy the one and only merder

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