this song isnt done. i dont plan on finishing it, and i dont plan or recording it. all these tracks about girls...lol man. wack, only one more, n dat one'll be on my album. but this is what i wrote...all quickstyle n shit...




<Hook>

I cant say, it'll just hurt to much//
I cant say, it'll destroy whats left of us//1
(x2)



<Verse 1>

[Yo]
Girl, i loved you with all of my heart//
I shared everything with you, was truthful from the start//1
I never thought that i would feel this way for you//
I never thought that my love could ever be so true//2
But it is, and now im going through all this suffering and pain//
Seeing you with someone else, its drivng me insane//3
Everytime i hear your voice, it hurts inside//
I would lay in bed talking to you and start to cry//4
Because the pain i feel, is just too much to bare//
The way it is now, it seems like you dont even care//5
We used to talk all day, be the closest of friends//
Always tell each other "i love you" over and over again//6
But things change, we never talk anymore//
Its like we were never even friends before//7
I cant take it, you and that guy together//
It seems as if ill be drowning in my own sorrow forever//8



...yea...thats it...

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finish it yo...or u could scrap together all ur unfinished rhymes like Nas' "Book of Rhymes"...haha...that would nice.

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hahaa werd huh, but its to wack ne way.

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