Food for thought perhaps. Anyways, any mistakes you guys find are welcomed

Moi, Comme un SDF

Est-il possible d’imaginer ce qui se passerait si on était un SDF ? Je dis, non. Une personne ne peut pas faire un jugement d’une vie qui est différente. On peut essayer de deviner, mais on ne peut pas réussir. Seulement un SDF ou une personne qui était un SDF peut faire ça. Maintenant, je vais essayer. Je ne réussirai pas mais comme les publicités de Pacific-Life disent : « Le plus grand risque est de ne pas en prendre . »
Il est difficile pour quelqu’un de devenir un SDF. Il y a des jobs aux McDonald’s ou le Burger King qui existent exprès pour les gens pauvres ou les gens qui ne sont pas des profesionels. Il n’empêche qu’il y ait des personnes qui n’ont pas des choses à faire : Des SDFs. J’imagine que la vie serait difficile (naturellement), misérable, et frustrante. De demander de l’argent aux autres jour après jour après jour n’est pas seulement une chose embarrassante mais c’est une chose qui montre qu’on est inférieur à l’autre. Tandis qu’on peut s’habituer à cette vie, il y aura toujours l’idée qu’on est inférieur et que les autres sont meilleurs. Et la condition n’est pas qu’on est seulement inférieur, mais qu’on est le plus inférieur dans la société. Peut-être une personne s’habitue-t-il à cette vie mais au fur et a à mesure, tôt ou tard, on va faire des choses désespérées parce qu’on ne peut pas vivre comme ça tous les jours.
Les SDFs sont les parias dans la société ; mais, si le gouvernement fait des choses pour aider ces gens ou fait des choses pour empêcher quelqu’un à devenir un SDF, le monde sera un meilleur endroit.

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-.-' if only i can read that

the only thing i understand is government, mcdonalds and bk lol

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That was really well written (I think so, at least^^;;)
I like how you explained the commonly percieved situation as opposed to what is actually happening.

I didn't know that AP had a major French composition (or is this daily work? ) I wonder if I should be afraid^_^;

my favorite line: "Une personne ne peut pas faire un jugement d’une vie qui est différente."

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That was really well written (I think so, at least^^;;)

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thanks

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I like how you explained the commonly percieved situation as opposed to what is actually happening.

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uh so i'm stating false facts?

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I didn't know that AP had a major French composition (or is this daily work? )

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you're going to have to write a composition for the AP test about some random subject. Our teacher assigns compositions in order to practice for the exam.


i actually didn't do too well on this composition

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"The weight of this sad time we must obey,/ Speak what we feel, not what we ought to say./ The oldest hath borne most; we that are young/ Shall never see so much, nor live so long."
King Lear (V.3.300-304)

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oh goodness...I didn't mean for that second sentence to come off as that O.O
I meant that you were explaining the difference between what people think is happening and what might actually be happening. Not that you weren't stating facts^_^;; I don't know how to explain better what I meant by that.

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i think i got most of that (score!) but what the hell is a SDF??

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SDF??

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homeless person. "sans domicile fixe"

I made the jump from French 3 to AP (skipped Fr.4) so my compositions are kinda simple- i don't like using the subjunctive constructions, the pluperfect, and all that stuff. There are some people in my class that write madd good compositions

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"The weight of this sad time we must obey,/ Speak what we feel, not what we ought to say./ The oldest hath borne most; we that are young/ Shall never see so much, nor live so long."
King Lear (V.3.300-304)

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homeless person. "sans domicile fixe"

I made the jump from French 3 to AP (skipped Fr.4) so my compositions are kinda simple- i don't like using the subjunctive constructions, the pluperfect, and all that stuff. There are some people in my class that write madd good compositions

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you didn't miss much, don't worry

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yep thats what i heard. thats why i didn't bother taking the class

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