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ajy
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yes i made a poem

When your stars are baked,
And your rivers fly,
Do you ever believe you were stuck out in the Sky,
When your castle breaks,
And your feet are dry,
Do you ever believe you were stuck out in the Sky,
Do you believe, when you're high,
That your life is tried,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't ever get stuck in the sky, when you're high:
When your moon is fake,
And your mermaids cry,
Do you ever believe you were stuck out in the Sky,
When your tunnel fades,
And your guide is shy,
Do you ever believe you were stuck out in the Sky,
Do you believe, when you're high,
That your life is tried,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't ever get stuck in the sky, when you're high,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't ever get stuck in the sky, when you're high
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't you ever get stuck in the sky,
Don't ever get stuck in the sky, when you're high

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pshh system of a down ~ peephole lolol

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quote:
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pshh system of a down ~ peephole lolol


YES


hahahahah

i thought no one would find out

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quote:
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YES


hahahahah

i thought no one would find out



hahaha i saw it coming. nice try though.

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haha... i'll over look it...

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quote:
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YES


hahahahah

i thought no one would find out


hahahaha ic ~~ i LOVE soad of course i would find out lol , and thats like one of my favorite songs by them .. it reminds me of a carnival hahaha

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lol frealz didn't sound possible you would write a poem

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haha at first it looked more like it should be lyrics for a song then a poet... then u were found out

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uh oh.....

lol, i dont think u wrote this

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