this will be a simple one:

10 bars MAX


The only good mark you'll be gettin is if you're a stamp collecter/

Harlem Heat Emcee couldn't cut me if he was a stage director/

Even Dr.Sholl's couldn't help you accomplish some kind of feat/ (Dr.Sholl's deals with feet)

Harlem is makin Ohio chilly cuz his heat is turning into sleet/

I have the capacity to accurately smash cats rapidly/

Ya lyrical technique is horrible, No one could read it avidly/

You should become a comedian cuz you're some kind of joke/

Actin like an egg that's cracked, the brain is fried like the yolk/

Sure this isn't my best piece but it's better than all yours combined/

Ya skills are ASS and remnants from the past cuz you're BEHIND/
(behind= ass, past is behind ^_^ )

get at me if u can bitch

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Last edited by paboh4life on 05-07-2003 at 02:22 AM

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your barking up the wrong tree,bruce lee/
cant u see nobody can stop me, they can only hope to contain me/
u say harlem is turing heat into sleet really nice crack
and that egg yolk shit at the bottom that really sucked ass/
just like your rhymes,u need to hold up/
like if i was a gunman at a 7-11 u need to just give the F"CK up/
so catch me if u can cause u gonna need some juice, so dont call hawian punch call your buddy bruce/ learn to spell fubu right/cause juss like usa im putting up a fight

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yo im not trying to fight with anyone but both of those sucked.

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yo im not trying to fight with anyone but both of those sucked.

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Originally posted by paboh4life
lol aight but uh i've been reading your keystyles.. and you suck more than ja rule... my opinion

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ive done one serious keystyle in the past month. the rest have been me imitating people. ill post up a good one when i have some time. until then, more criticism!

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man. YOU ALL SUCK!

jpjp

all love man. i suck... haha

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ive done one serious keystyle in the past month. the rest have been me imitating people. ill post up a good one when i have some time. until then, more criticism!

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i like cats//

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so i wear hats//

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but i aint like u sociocrats//

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lol uhh

u is fats.//

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so snap at that..

puahahah

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