hi *^_^*
what's up ppl - i dunno how this is gonna be cuz i haven't freestyled in a long ass time - but i have something i wanna get out, so i'm gonna give it a shot. your critique is welcomed.
i got pain in my heart since i left you, boo - there was shit goin on but all i felt was you - you took away my sadness and made my body smile - i wanted you inside me so we kicked it for a while. it ain't all about the game like the words i said to you - i wanted you to love me and i believe you do -
speed temptress - leave you restless - fit your body like a glove - pretendin we weren't fuckin - we were really makin love. without you i feel anger cuz i know i had to leave - still remember our ecstacy when you made my passions bleed - feel the pain inside my heart that brings fuckin misery - my past is a demon that engulfs me like a sea -
the sea of troubles i oppose - and by opposin -end -
be like hamlet - methodical madness that will kill me in the end.
see the sun rise - in your eyes - trapped inside your heart - wanna tell you what i'm feelin - i've been knowin it from the start
dammit man, i want to love you and hold you til i die - but i look - you ain't beside me so all i do is cry - the phenomenon of pain is to0 fuckin great to measure - it's all inside my soul - like your love that gives me pleasure.
body achin - frustratin - tears of blood from my soul - the wound is pourin freely cuz i just can't let you go - i love you then i left you - but baby you gotta know - without you i'm pathetic - cuz you're lovin makes me whole.
how can i be postin shit and only whisper to the wind?- i'm cold and twisted in the bedsheets i be rollin in - gotta have you in my arms when will you fuckin come to me? prayin soon - i pray soon God will bring you back to me - you're lost but in the darkness i stand there with the key - let me be your heart's desire like you are for me - off the cuff and off the chains - we left the world behind - fuck the gateways that bring you hell - you made me lose all mine - found me cryin - drank tha tear drop from my lonely eye - you gave me so much pleasure that i didn't want to cry.
baby, there's shit that still be givin me butterflies - thinkin bout ridin on the highway and findin you so fine - eatin with your homies and fuckin 'round with mine - takin you to places that you ain't never seen - holdin you so tightly and feelin like a queen - i see the look in your eyes that fills me to the brim - my cup runneth over and i can't chalk it up as sin - lose you never - love forever - chose to keep you - and keep it real. baby boy, this is our story - and this is the pain i feel.
wow, that was really fuckin long . . . and lame - but i'm gonna post it anyway - haha, looks like a poem, but that's aight - you'll get over it, i know i will *^_^*
peace
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